Great job with the energy and projecting! I noticed that you weren't articulating all of the words, and some were blending together so make sure you speak them nice and clearly. If you have to go a little slower to really hit them, then do that. Some parts were a little quick and the articulation took a hit. The more you practice and articulate, the more you'll get used to it. Watch with your pronounciation too. You mispronounced the word "delicacy". If you are unsure of how to say a word, you can google it and listen back to how its accurately pronounced. You dont want to confused the audience and have them guessing what you're trying to say.

I absolutely loved the zombie and the way you drifted from that into the lower tone and then a big hit in energy! That was super cool! Other than that, you did a great job! Just focus on your articulation and continue practicing your tongue twisters and exercises.