Nice job with the nice, clear tone! There was some issues with articulation and some words not having the clarity they need, so make sure you hit every part of the word beginning. middle and end. I could hear some hesitation going on in certain spots, making it sound like you were second guessing yourself for a second. You wanna make sure you have a nice clean flow and sound confident in what you're saying. Remember, you're that character and you know every single word thats gonna come next. If you do end up making a mistake, restart from the previous start of the line so that you have a clean take and dont have to edit too much post. Practice the script a few times before recording so that you have a better idea of whats going on and what words are coming as you perform. Having time to practice is great vs treating it as a cold read, which is a bit harder to do. Keep practicing reading aloud and work on your tongue twisters and exercises. Looking forward to hearing more!