Relaxed and calm paced delivery

You have such a kind and warm voice! Your diction is really nice here. Can hear the difference between the "d"s and "t"s really clearly, which is hard to do! I would definitely listen to you do audiobooks if you want to go into that :)

First thing I could hear is in the words Peter and little, you pronounced the T's as D's. Its something we all do in our everyday speech since we tend to talk more lazy, but if this was an audiobook or for children, you want to accurately articulate the letters and words. Thats why doing tongue twisters everyday and even practicing this script is a huge help cause it gets your mind and mouth used to saying words. Over exaggerate those words and practice doing that and before you know it, you're gonna hear a big difference!I love your tone! It was very calm and I can imagine you speaking to a younger audience. There were still other words that had those T's and D's mixed, mainly if the word at the T or D in the middle of it, so listen back to those words and focus on saying every part of the word accurately and clearly. This was a great first take so I cant wait to hear more!