Good projection and enunciation

Your speed and annunciation were great. Natural readers voice but with a lot of character. I liked it.

Love the energy and projection at the beginning! Here are some humble observations:

0:06 - 0:09 - Be careful of falling into rhythms that can sound a little staccato and robotic (unless you're trying for a character like that).

The tone and pacing shifted about 0:40 and became slightly slower and not as sharp/articulate and the energy dropped off a bit. While change-ups can be good, be sure to keep the same character throughout.

0:44 - The list you gave all sounded the same - don't be afraid to change it up as you read and keep the listener interested.

0:50 - Feels like the you may have lost some confidence on this section. Be strong. You got this! :D

1:03 - "Peter began working" kind of ran together and lost some power. Just something to be aware of and mindful of enunciating each word. The longer the text, the more challenging this becomes!

1:20 - Noting some of that staccato / robotic tone / rhythm again.

Nice job sing-songing the tongue twister. Not sure if it defeats the practice or not, but it sounded great! Nice thinking outside the box!

Overall - great energy and character in the read! Keep up the good work!