Great job on the customer. That made me smile.

Nice job putting the energy into your read and working on the articulation and projection. This can definitely be challenging! In another take, I would encourage you to go even bigger with the energy and projection. Be larger than life! Talk to the back of the room!

0:10 In the focus of articulation - "delightful" you can't really hear the "T" sound.

0:12 Nice read on "GGG" company. Nice emphasis and warmth on the company name. This is important to do with commercial work (after all - they're probably the one paying you!. :))

0:37 Nice creature sound effects.

0:56 Best-est-est - In another take, I'd encourage you to play with change ups on the second and/or third "est" to put more life and energy into it instead of keeping them all the same sound.

1:09 "Enhanced" - couldn't really hear the "D". Make sure to articulate all syllables and words clearly when practicing articulation and enunciation.

1:22 I like how you clearly articulated the phone number and still added style/character to it with making it a bit sing-songy. Nice job!

I encourage you to keep practicing the clear articulation and enunciation. The ends of words will often get left off or end with a soft sound, so when you are practicing articulation make sure the full word is pronounced.

The reason we practice enunciation and articulation and even exaggerate while practicing these is so it gets our minds and mouths used to not being lazy when we speak, which is very important with voice acting to ensure we are clearly heard and understood. That's why people pay for professional voice overs! :D

Overall, I think you did a lovely job and the efforts you put in were noticed. Keep practicing and keep up the good work! You will see results!