This was great! I enjoyed the upbeat take on the script. It initially contrasts, but makes the whole take distinct and memorable.

Very nice read! Very smooth. Good use of projection. You have a nice conversational read - very useful in commercial trends right now.

0:17 "GGG". If this were a commercial, you would generally want to throw a lot of emphasis and confidence on the company brand (maybe even some warmth like a hug) - after all - that's important (and they're probably the one paying you!). :)

0:22 Nice genuine laugh

0:45 For articulation practice, the "T" in "delightful" could have been hit a bit harder as well as the "T" in "isn't" at 0:48. Also the "D" in "enhanced" didn't come through completely at 1:10. The ends of words will often get left off or end with a soft sound, so when you are practicing articulation make sure the full word is pronounced. (Though I must say, I felt you did very well with this in general.)

0:57 Best-est-est - In another take, I'd encourage you to play with change ups on the second and/or third "est" to put more life and energy into it instead of keeping them all the same sound.

1:30 In another take, I'd encourage you to read the tagline with perhaps more energy and conviction. The energy kind of dropped off as you finished this line. The tagline at the end of a commercial is usually something we want to read with emphasis/importance in a commercial read to make it memorable. The last thing is often what people remember so we want to do it well!

Overall, well done! Good projection and articulation was very good through much of the read. Keep up the good work!