Nice job with your articulation! There were only a few words here and there where you changed the T to a D, like in the words jotting and patterns, but I definitely could hear a audiobook style going on here. I like the way you spoke during the "tadpoles, tortoises..." and gave it that drag out, whimsical type of vibe. You did well with the focus for this week!I'd love to hear you play a little more in the emotions of the scenes as a next step. Think about the character Peter and his journey in the script. What he's feeling and what you want the audience to feel. Who are you to Peter? Are you someone that knows him, is he a character you created in your mind? Really delve deep into the world and the emotional impact. Other than that your pacing was nice and the tone was good. Nice work!