Awesome enunciation! I think you did a great job with this really difficult script! You also did a great job on setting the correct tone for this script as I believed it perfectly fit a gentle storybook reading for children. You stumbled on a word or two but you played it off very well and I don't think it took away from the great read.

Wonderful job on your articulation! There were a few words where you didn't enunciate the ending letter, but overall you hit most of the main ones that most tend to miss. You started out hitting the T's in Peter and then there was one in the middle where you pronounced the T as a D, so just watch losing those. There was also a moment where you flubbed a little, so to make cleanup and post easier, try to restart from the beginning of the sentence just as a reminder for future auditions and recordings. Now I challenge you to continue practicing this and making the articulation and flow more natural, but this was a very great start!