For this homework, we really wanna hear to hit on the articulation of the words. There were a lot of moments where your words were bleeding into each other and a bit mumbly, so make sure you keep a clear, consistency to the clarity of the words. There was a moment where you hesitated on your words and you were trying to continue forward, but it wasn't coming out super clean, so if you make a mistake make sure you take a moment, recoup and then start over from the beginning of the sentence. This will help you post editing so you have a nice, clean take and can cut the dead space to make it have a normal pause. When you said "exhilarated" it also sounded either way too fast, or it got distorted/cut somewhere, so watch out for little things like that as well with your auditions. I could also hear weird cuts or distortion in different spots throughout, so it couldve been your mic or if you did anything to the audio. Dont be afraid to have fun with the script! I'd love to see more of a dynamic and fun tone with this. Your zombie was nice, but think of the rest of what you're speaking and what you want to convey to the audience. Keep up the good work!