I enjoyed this - your voice is warm and pleasant to listen to, especially the audible smile after your undead noises (zombie Scooby Doo? :D). In terms of things to work on I reckon you could stand to slow down & work on maintaining consistent tempo. There were a couple of places where you rushed a bit making your articulation less clear (for example around "working non-stop to consistently create"). You did a good job recovering from your stumbles :)

Wonderful job with your energy and excitement of the script! With the amount of energy you had there were a few moments where your words sounded a bit jumbled and not enunciated as strongly as they could have been, but the energy fit super well with this. Try listening to the recording as the audience who doesn’t have the script in front of them. Are you able to make out every word that you said? If not, be sure to slow down your speaking a touch to make sure each word is clear. You did very well with moving past the mistakes and restarting at the beginning of the sentence, just don't lose that energy. take a moment longer if needed to get yourself back into the zone. Keep working on the exercises as always and keep up the great work!