In the beginning, the word “styles” gets cut/glitches out so always remember to listen back on your audio and fix those sorta things (No worries with the homeworks since we say to send unedited, just mentioning it for real auditions and such). Also, if you ever hesitate at any part, you can just start from the beginning of the sentence and redo it! Sometimes you can edit things to make them connect and remove the weird pauses, but it’s easier to just redo the line itself. 

I love the friendly tone you have and the way you say words with little changes in inflections! It makes this sound very natural and as if you’re speaking just how you normally would which is very important. I would say to make sure you articulate your words a touch more so that they’re more clear, but overall this is a great start! 

I don’t hear you projecting your voice which is the main point for this homework. You want it to fit the scene of being in a gym with no microphone and you need people to hear you at the other end of the room. Make sure you take in enough air to fill up your lungs and let that power up your voice as you push out the words. You wouldn’t be screaming or anything crazy, just just want to give your voice way more volume naturally. Keep up on your exercises and I can’t wait to see the improvement in the coming weeks!