I think you sounded great!

Manuel! Don't worry about your pronounciation. Doing tongue twisters, practicing reading aloud, and even mimic english speakers like in anime, tv, radio, etc and record yourself saying it back everyday will help you improve this and next weeks scripts (Technically you have them now since Im late to this haha), those are great ones to really help. I want you to first slow down a bit with this as you're rushing through pretty fast, which can cause your articulation to disppear and words start to slur together. Take your time to really hit the words and this will also help you not run out of breath as fast. This also causes you to take smaller breaths vs big, deep ones cause you're trying to get through the script faster, so just be mindful that you're filling up your lungs with air all the way vs only a little bit. The projection is lacking a bit to fit the scene, but taking in bigger breaths and using your diaphragm to push those words out. Make sure your posture is nice and straight as well! You can do the trick of placing your phone at the other end of a big room, hit record see if your voice reaches it from the other end. If it doesn't, it means you need to project more! If it does, you're projecting! Overall, you have a great tone and some good friendly variation going on so keep working on the exercises, tongue twisters, and you'll see the improvement!