Your voice is so clear and precise. I like how you enounciate the words.

First, I want to comment on the pattern I hear going on or the singy-songy tone you got! In the beginning, you're voice tends to do a wave, going down and up constantly, which can make it sound a bit robotic in a sense. To fix this, you wanna try to change up those inflections, pauses, empahsis, etc to give it more of a natural flow. Think about someone you would speak to everyday and try to get your voice into your natural pattern. I know with commercial type scripts, everyone tends to go into a "retail voice" in a way (I know I do haha)Nice job focusing on your articulation! Your words are nice and clear and you took your time. Make sure that it doesnt get too unnnatural sounding as you focus on hitting each word, but thats gonna come with time and practice. The more you articulate and get your mouth and mind used to saying things that way, you'll naturally start to do it on your own without thinking about it.Make sure to project! Think of yourself in a gym with no mic and you need someone to hear you at the other end of the room. Make sure your posture is straight and use your diaphragm to push those words to that person. Take big, deep breaths! Keep up the good work!