Great emphasis on the lines

Great job. Your inflections were even throughout the entire script. Your voice suited this script really well. Good energy throughout. Annunciation on point.

Nice job with this! I like the variation and the articulation is very clear! Now I want you to speed up slightly to make it sound more natural speaking. Because of you taking your time, you tend to have some big pauses betweens sections which makes it sound more choppy vs a nice flow, which is fantastic for practice! So now using this as the foundation, try to decrease those pauses a bit (minus the ones where you need to take that nice big breath).You have a great tone and it was very fun to listen to, BUT we need that projection to fit the scenario! Remember you're in a gymnasium with no microphone and you need the people at the other end of the gym to hear you. Really use that diaphragm and fill up those lungs to get that volume needed! Honestly this is a great start and I can't wait to hear more!