I really liked the delivery of certain words for some humor. Overall nice job with the proper breathing when needed and also sounded authentic too!

Nice job! Your pacing was good and you took time to hit on the articulation. There were some moments where it got a touch too slow for a second or 2 because you were taking micro breaths between words and it caused you to have some bigger pauses, so remember to take a big, deep breath so you can avoid doing that. The main thing I want you to focus on is taking bigger breaths so you can power through more words and avoid those micro breaths. I couldnt hear you taking in those deep breaths (which it could also be your mic didnt pick them up or they were edited out or something) but really use your diaphragm for those. The more air you get into your lungs, the more control you'll have with your voice.

I can hear a little projection going on which is awesome! I think you can give me more though and thats where more air and using your diaphragm come into play. Really push out those words with your voice to fit the scene of being in a gym with no mic.I like the tone you have and it sounds like you were having fun! It makes the audience more inclined to listen when you have these change ups in there so good job. Keep up on the exercises and continue working hard!