You have a nice warm voice, great job!

Nice work on your articulation and enunciation! This is a good foundation to start with. I would say to speed up just a hair just so it sounds more like a natural conversation. This speed is great for kids, but for adults it can cause the audience to lose interest faster as they wait for whats next. Having a nice flow and pace will keep them drawn in along with having more variations in your tone to make your performance stand out. I don’t hear the projection! Remember you want your performance to fit the scene given or it won’t sound realistic. The scene is being in a gym with no mic and you need people to hear you from the other end of the room. Use your diaphragm and take in a big, deep breath to give your voice that power needed. Keep working on your exercises and always think about the overall picture and how you want the others to hear and feel. There are a lot of variables that come into play with the scene, who you speak to, etc so try to place yourself into the scenario. Can’t wait to hear more!