Great job with this! I could hear some variations in inflections and your friendly tone fits well with this. First, I can hear you taking some decent breaths which is great, but I feel you can take even bigger breaths just to really help push through the words. I hear hear you losing breath fast which could be from not taking big enough breath or your lung capapcity isn't able to hande much, but thats where those breathing exercises and doggy pants come in!! Make sure you keep up on those and really use your diaphragm. I don't hear you projecting your voice, which can also be from what I said above - not enough air in the lungs! You want your voice to have the power to reach someone on the other end of a gym with no microphone, so think about that scenario. You can also practice by placing your phone at the end of your room and record yourself on the other end speaking in tis same volume and see how well your phone picks up your voice. Keep up the good work and keep on those doggy pants!