Class Session 1

Kaley Lynn for Role

Voice Actor
Voice Actor
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Kaley Lynn
Class Session 1
Ayden
Ayden

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    Kaley Lynn
    Kaley Lynn

    Thanks so much for the feedback! I really appreciate it :) I kind of tried to speed things up in a section at the very end, but you're right, it would have been interesting to do that throughout!

MeaganA
MeaganA

Yes! Smiling definitely affects the tone of your voice! This is super important, especially if you work on kid projects, which I think your voice fits great in. You’re also giving a bit of a sultry tone with the way you emphasize some words in certain spots which I feel could really work well with certain commercials and audiences. This pacing is great for kids' work, but for adults I would speed up a little as if you're speaking to me for example. We don't want to talk too slowly since we're able to comprehend way more than a child can. We wanna keep the audience engaged, wanting more as you continue on. I agree you have a consistent pace going on, so don't be afraid to change up here and there to make it more unique. But your articulation and clarity is great here! Make sure you project your voice! This would fit more if someone was next to you vs someone who is at the other end of a gym and you need them to hear you without a mic. You wanna use your diaphragm and take a big, deep breath so that you give your voice more power.Great work and I can't wait to see your improvement!

    Kaley Lynn
    Kaley Lynn

    Thank you so much for the feedback! I usually do ASMR work so I really struggle with projection and speed haha, I'm looking forward to working on it more and I'll definitely keep it in mind going forward!

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