Nicely done!

awesome work :D and super relatable! i also felt as i continued reading the more i really felt the script and got into it more as well

I love the tone you gave for this! Very interesting and fun to listen to. I noticed that you were taking quite a few micro breaths between every few words, which happens when you don't have enough air in your lungs to get through. Make sure you use your diaphragm and really breath in to get as much air as you can and try to distribute the air as you go on until you find a good spot to take another pause to get another big breath it. The projection is lacking in the beginning, but when you got to "No one will call on you" I could hear you project the "no"! I agree you started off with none, but then the second half you had a bit, so that's a great start! I want you to project even more though. Remember you're in a gym with no mic and you gotta make your voice heard throughout the whole room, so push out your words. It's totally natural over time you start to really get into things. I think a good trick to do is before recording, just get into character. Move around, say some things, have a conversation as the character, then hit that record button and dive right in! It ensures that you're already in the mindset. Great job with this and keep up the good work!