If I heard this on the radio, the thought that it was made by someone who's still learning VA wouldnt've crossed my mind. Sounds very professional!

You have such a friendly tone for this! I also really like the change you gave for the disclaimers part! It's something unique that stands out and makes it more intersting and engaging to listen to. But of course we want more projection, which is what I will be mentioning below this.I can definitely hear some projection going on which is a great start, but I want even more! Think about the scene and if your voice would reach everyone inside a gymnasium with no microphone. You want to have a lot of power in your voice and volume, so take in really big breaths. I can hear some weird pauses in breaths or microbreaths going on between words, which also happens from lack of air in your lungs, so keep practicing your exercises to build that tolerance and muscle and you'll soon see such a huge difference in how much control you have over your voice and air! Overall this was great so nicely done!