You did very well with your articulation and making sure that everything was nice and clear! This gave me motivational speaker vibes, like I was watching you on stage and you're trying to convey your message to the audience. We are missing in the projectiion though, so remember to use your diaphragm and fill up your lungs with air so that your voice naturally starts to project and gain that power needed for the scenario of being in a gym with no mic. Your volume fits well with in small room with people, but really push those words out!

I love the little accent change with entree fee! It gave a really fun, engaging moment that helped switch it up from the serious tone to a little playfulness. Good job with handling the mistake and restarting from the beginning of the sentence. Overall you had a great tone. Keep on your exercises!