Amazing energy and enunciations! Only thing you need to work on is pacing and flow.

Nice job with the projection in this read! I noticed you slowed down the pacing just a little, which helped create a smooth flow overall—great work on that. One area to focus on is maintaining consistency in your energy throughout the script. Toward the end, your energy seemed to dip slightly, which can weaken the impact of your performance. This is where pacing comes into play—slowing down just a smidge more can help you maintain both your flow and energy, allowing you to stay fully engaged from start to finish.

Another point to keep in mind is avoiding repetition in how you deliver lines. When everything is read in a similar way, it can create a predictable pattern that makes the performance feel less dynamic. To keep your delivery engaging, try experimenting with different tones, inflections, and pacing across your lines. For example, you could emphasize certain words differently or adjust your emotional intensity to reflect the varying moments in the script. This variety not only keeps the listener engaged but also highlights your versatility as a voice actor.

Overall, I thought you did a great job! Your projection and flow were strong, and with continued focus on maintaining energy and adding variety to your delivery, you’ll keep refining and elevating your performance. Keep up the great work