While I was able to understand your works clearly, you wanna slow down a bit. You don’t have to speed through and have a ton of words all in one breath (you’ll build up your breath control and lung capacity as you do your exercises and such). By rushing through too fast, it causes those listening to have a hard time trying to catch up and absorb everything you say, which can sometimes cause people to just not listen. You want to find a nice flow and pace so that its pleasant for them to listen to. But again, you did good with your articulation!

You were running out of breath quite a bit, which happened because you were going so fast and using up too much of your air. So again, slowing down and taking time to take deeper breaths, you’ll be able to have a lot more control with your voice.I want you to focus on your projection since there wasn’t much going on here with that. Think about the scenario given to you and how you can make it sound as realistic to the scene as possible. Imagine that you do not have a mic and you need the people to hear from the other side of a large gymnasium. We sometimes forget since we have a mic and we can adjust our gain and such, but to make it sound real we have to adjust to the scene and character. Overall, keep up the great work and keep on the exercises!