Wow - great breath control! Those felt like some LONG phrases and you breezed right by them. I liked your choices with expressing some subtle emotional choices too!

Good read! There are two main areas I’d like you to focus on: your breath support and your energy.

First, let’s talk about breath support. During the read, especially when going through those long lists, it sounded like you were running out of breath at times. This can make the delivery feel rushed or strained. As we’ve learned in class, incorporating breath marks into your script is a great way to plan your breaths strategically. This ensures that your performance sounds smooth and controlled, even during longer phrases. Kudos to you for powering through the list, but improving your breath support will make it feel more seamless and effortless.

To build stamina and better manage your breath, continue practicing vocal exercises and techniques like doggy pants. These exercises are excellent for strengthening your diaphragm and helping you maintain a consistent airflow. Over time, this will make it easier to sustain longer passages without running out of breath, giving your delivery a more polished and professional feel.

Now, onto energy. I noticed that your energy started to dip as the read progressed. Consistent energy is crucial because it directly impacts the believability of your performance. When your energy fluctuates, it can break the connection with the listener. To combat this, try slowing down your pacing slightly. A slower pace not only gives you time to breathe but also helps maintain focus and intensity throughout the performance. This ensures that every part of your read feels intentional and engaging.

Overall, this was a solid performance! You’ve got a strong foundation, and with continued focus on breath support and consistent energy, you’ll take your delivery to the next level.