Sorry it took so long, The first thing I’d like you to work on is slowing down your read and pacing yourself. Taking your time with the script will not only make your delivery feel more natural but also improve your articulation. I noticed that some of your words were slurring together, which can make it harder for the listener to fully grasp what you’re saying. Slowing down allows you to focus on pronouncing each word clearly and gives your audience a chance to absorb your performance.

Also, don’t feel the need to power through your performance if you make a mistake. It’s completely okay to take a quick pause, reset yourself, and start from the beginning of the sentence. This approach helps maintain your energy and ensures the rest of your read stays consistent. Pausing for a moment to regroup can make a big difference in keeping the quality of your performance strong.

Overall, take your time and trust that a steady, thoughtful delivery will always make a more positive impression. You’re doing great, and with these adjustments, your read will feel even more polished. Keep practicing, and I’m excited to hear how you continue to grow!