Your Breath Contol is really good. Your voice has a really nice Announcer feel to it. Everything feels passionate.

You have a very nice commercial/radio voice! It fits really well with this sorta script. Your words are nice and clear and you articulated very well. There were some moments where I could hear you run out of breath a touch, but other parts where I heard you take a big breath and get through quite a bit so you’re definitely there! Keep up with your breathing exercises and warmups and you’ll see a huge difference here.I like the variation of tone and emphasis throughout! Your audience will be more likely to continue listening as they invest what you’ll say next. The big thing I want you to work on is making sure you project your voice. Remember you should be a in a gym with people at the other end and you have no mic, so how will they be able to hear you? You want to get louder with your voice, not necessarily screaming, but more of a shout/raised voice so it hits them. Overall this is a great start!