Very good pacing. I loved the introduction you gave yourself. Definitely grabbed my attention!

Nice job with this and I like the little adlib in the beginning to help you get that energy and into character!So I notice that you start to lose your energy as you go through the sentences. You start off strong, and as you start losing breath your energy starts to deplete along with it. Take bigger, deeper breaths so that you have that consistent energy throughout the whole performance. I can hear some projection going on in certain spots which is great, but try to get even louder! You’re in a gym with no mic and you need someone to hear you from the other end of the room. This is a great start though! I can hear you having fun with this and the variations you’re giving really draw us in. There were some moments you ran out of breath and took some weird pauses, but just focus on having enough air to get through and find certain spots that fit well for a moment to take a new breath. Great work with this and continue practicing and working on your exercises!