Slow down a bit! Because you’re rushing through the words, you’re running out of breath more quickly and that can cause you to flub up as well. You wanna make sure you take in enough air and have a nice, steady flow so that it all is natural. I couldn’t hear you taking in big enough breaths so make sure you have enough air in your lungs to power through more. Because of the speed you’re going, you also lose your articulation and clarity in your words so be mindful of that. We want you to be very clear! Remember that your audience wont have this script to follow, so they rely on your clarity to be able to understand everything that is being said. You’re also lacking in projection, which again not having enough air and not using your diaphragm is to blame. Work on your breathing exercises to help with breath control and to build up your lung capacity to take in more air. We want that power in your voice and volume without the help of a microphone and interface. Let yourself naturally get loud! Keep up the good work and continue working on your exercises! Good job!