that was a lot of fun, but killing me leaving all those breaths in!

Good pacing. Your voice is very easy to listen too. Great job!

Great stuff, the accent makes it for me and the pacing was good.

You have a lovely, soothing tone! We're missing a big thing for this week which is...projection! This take would be good for a person who is next to you, but for the scenario of being in a gym with no mic, do you think your voice would be heard throughout the whole room? I want you to use your diaphragm and fill up your lungs with as much air as they can take so that your voice naturally gains that power and volume. The funny thing is we all breath wrong in our daily lives because we aren't working our diaphragms to breath. We usually just take in smaller breaths, but for performing we we're speaking a bunch so using our diaphragm is essential for helping with projection, articulation, clarity and overall performance. Having enough air in your lungs will also help you so that you aren't running out of breaths and having to stop or struggle to finish sentences. I could hear you having a little pattern going on like at "act now, order today..." where you would go down and up like the sing-songy tone, so just make sure you try to break that up a little so its not a consistent thing. Keep working on your breathing exercises and keep up the good work!