Nice with your articulation and clarity! I notice you taking micro breaths every few words, so try to take bigger breaths at the beginning so that you can power through more and end at a good place. When you take those micro breaths, it starts to get a little choppy and sound more unnatural so we want this to sound very natural and conversational. Also make sure you project! You sound a bit low so we wanna have a lot more volume. Make sure your voice can be heard by someone at the far end of a gymnasium without you having a mic to help you. Get enough air into your lungs and use your diaphragm to push the words and voice out. The more you practice and work on your exercises and doggy pants, the more you'll train yourself to handle more words and increase your lung capacity to hold more air.Nice job with redoing your mistake from beginning of the sentence versus continuing on. This is great, especially when editing back! Great job and keep up the good work!