Great tone and pacing! Your voice is nice and clear and you got good energy going on. We’re lacking that projection needed for the scenario though, so remember to take a deep breath and fill up your lungs with air, pushing your voice out with your diaphragm so that it gets loud enough to reach across the room. The scene is being in a gymnasium without a microphone, so think about how another person would hear you if they are at the other end of the gym. 

There were some very slight articulation issues but nothing you can’t fix easily! Just remember to pronounce the whole word so that you hear everything vs slurring them together. Example, with the word “act” I couldn’t hear the T at the end, making it sound like “ac” so just be mindful of small things like that. Keep it up and continue with your breathing exercises!