Thanks for this audition. The voice is definitely there, but if you get a chance before the deadline, put in another and try to imagine yourself in this context: Hades is attempting to kill the world because he believes death is beauty. You are a knight of Athena and it's your duty to protect those who are attacked. However, you didn't make it in time and a village has been destroyed. Now you're super pissed as you say the first line and pissed at Athena as you say the second. Hope that helps and good luck.