Voice is good and mic quality is decent, however the acting is kind of flat, I feel as though both her lines could have a bit more flare to them especially line 2. (I really recommend watching the video to get an idea on how the line should be said) if you can improve in the acting department then you might have a better chance of being casted.
Hello! Thank you for the feedback. However the video on the audition page doesn't seem to be working for me, so I had to go youtube digging for some other ones. I realize the deadline is today, may I resubmit another audition?
Well because of the lack of auditions, the deadline is being pushed back so you have time.