Demons in my head, audio comic?
Foundry for Uncle Max
A gruff man, born and raised in the ghetto. He's late 30's early 40's. He is of African American decent and often picks on his nephew Draco for picking up his father's "chronically pale white skin" and often affectionately refers to him as whitey.
Warning, he tends to curse and use less modernly exceptional phrases and words. He is written this way for a reason.
- new york (brooklyn)
- male adult
- gangster
(serious into lovingly mocking) Cmon nephew. I know you're usually pretty pale, but... What's going on? You look like you've seen a ghost... Or are one
(Angry) LITTLE WHITEY! Explain to me... Who is this little ninja bimbo, and why the hell is she in my house, and on MY DAMN COUCH!
(stressed) are you genuinely stupid nephew? Do I need to take you to the doc and get you the retard test, cause if I do... I will.
Lines 2 and 3 are so close to perfect. But you just sound a bit too cheesy on line one. For example you're at like an avatar Sokka level of joking, and I want you to come down to a zuko level of joking. Can you try that for me?