Demons in my head, audio comic?
Ezzer for Uncle Oz (Ozzy)
Uncle Oz is a supporting character and the uncle of Rueben and his currently unnamed brother. He's a big burly man who owns his own boxing gym.
- male adult
- male senior
(Jokingly) Okay hot head, maybe hit me like a man instead of an animal.
(serious) You wouldn't survive a day out in the real world like that. Heck, we're family and even I want to hit you for talking to me like that.
(Proud) YES! Left, right, duck, quick jab, quick jab. GREAT JOB LITTLE RUBY!
Great voice! But I'm noticing some awkward pausing at some points, and just a bit flat in certain parts of your delivery. Do you think you could try again for me with a little bit better line retention and more intensity in your voice? If you want a bit of reference please check out MHA's endeavour. Hopefully I'll get to hear more of your work. Id love it if you have it another shot with these changes!