The Purgatorians 'Prequel before the sequel' miniseries
Jbongo_VA for Trevor Longstrom
Trevor is a friendly and polite young man who fears Elena. He works on the farm and is a hard worker.
Age range – 21-26
Accents allowed – British, Welsh, Irish, American, Australian.
Trevor needs to be able to portray friendliness and nervousness mixed with fear
Line 1 - Elena is talking to them and Billy calls her by her first name. Trevor knows the council are strict and can be dangerous so this worries him about possible repercussions.
Line 2 - Farm work can be tedious and repetitive. The boredom in Trevor's voice reflects this.
Line 3 - Trevor is defending himself against Billy's mocking in a friendly manner. Just imagine a friend has mocked you in friendly banter and how your reply would come across. Don't come across as angry, make it sound friendly.
- english
- male adult
- british
- ausrtralian
- nervousness
- friendly
- voice actor
- american
- welsh
- irish
- boredom
- 21-26
(shocked and a little scared) Billy! No, you can't call... You just called her Elena.
(Boredom) The same as everyday. Planting seeds and tending to the animals. Why do they need so many fields for so few people. We need more help here.
(Friendly, jokingly) I wasn't scared. I was cautious. There's a big difference. I'd like to keep my head on my shoulders, thank you very much.
Be careful of the noise on your audio. Sometimes it's difficult to get rid of or hide and could require retakes if asked.
Line 1 - These were fine
Line 2 - Take 1 sounded a little more natural than 2
Line 3 - Take 1 again sounded more natural.
Overall, the noise is noticeable behind your voice. The show is looking for realistic sounding characters, not animated, which you did deliver upon with take 1 of the lines. Take 2 wasn't animated but I don't think they sounded as though they would be a part of a conversation between friends.
Thank you for the feedback! Will take steps to improve. I appreciate you taking the time to go through everything and I hope you feel better soon.