Hello,Thank you for your audition, it was really not bad! However, I feel that the performance lacked a bit of scene visualization and character internalization. The delivery felt monotone in several parts, almost neutral in tone.
Listening to your demo, I realized that your experience in narration or commercial work might have taken over, which is definitely a strength in that field. However, for audio drama, don’t hesitate to push further and explore more emotional depth.
Thank you again for your effort!