Hi there, thank you for your audition? Have you processed the audio?
I cut out a few takes I wasn't the biggest fan of (I believe I did three for each line), and I think I deleted some space to avoid dead air. Besides that (which is probably a lot), the audio's otherwise untouched.
Thank you for your audition. For someone without prior experience in this type of audio work, it was a solid effort, and I admire the courage it takes to dive into something new. I can definitely hear potential, so keep honing your acting skills—I’m confident it will get even better with time.
One note: be mindful of your audio quality. It seems like there’s some movement or contact with the walls of your recording space, which can create distractions. Thank you again for your submission, and best of luck moving forward! Have a great day!