Hello, thank you very much for your audition. You seem to have real potential, but unfortunately, the audio quality is a bit problematic. The dialogue sounds choppy, and there is noticeable background noise that affects the overall clarity. I recommend working on noise reduction and ensuring your recording space is properly soundproofed to capture a cleaner, more professional sound. Additionally, focusing on smoother delivery could help make the dialogue feel more fluid :)For these reasons, I won’t be able to give a positive follow-up to your audition, but I do appreciate your interest and hope to hear from you again with improved audio. Have a great day!