Ah~ This isn't my project so it isn't my place or anything to tell you things. I just wanna help! ;w; Okay! The lines sound good just maybe for the second line the "ow" part could have been shorten as like, getting hit in the moment. Long-gating it makes it sound like the character would be whiny and or whimpy.but that's just me and how I pictured how it was said with out looking at the line. It was believable for that type of character tho.;w; The crack in the voice for the third line makes the character more of a whimp type character voice. (Personally, I like it!) Oh a second note, Maybe do 3 different takes of each line so you get one that might sound fitting to the creator of the project. >wO I really love your voice.... ;w;...I love everyone's voice tho. OTL'"