Project: Vigilante
Neil Seefeldt for Detective Oliver Finnian
Vocal Profile: baritone to bass range; authoritative, formal and sometimes uses profanity; no preference for accent, feel free to experiment
Character Profile: aged 27/28; his recent promotion to Detective can be accredited to his obsession with his work; used to know and respect the previous King of Spades when he was a constable but he does not agree with breaking the law; his jokes are terrifying
Feel free to take creative liberties with the lines!
- english
- male adult
[humourous] A holiday? Bold of you to assume I'd authorise leave when we have a menace playing town hero. At ease, Constable, I'm joking.
[furious] Have we still not tracked down who these anonymous notes are coming from?! What is our budget being wasted on?!
[monologue] I'm Detective Finnian, you wanted to see me? A lead on the vigilante? My men and I have been looking for months and you mean to tell me you came across this only yesterday? If you're pulling my leg, you had better think twice, I'm currently not in the mood. I see. In that case I will look into it, thank you for your time. [sighs] Sorry, I've no time for an interview, I don't sleep as it is, the last thing I need is the media on my back too.
The way you express your emotions is great, you have quite a calm and authoritative tone in your voice which make the emotive tones in the monologue a little weak but the strength of them does show in the first two lines. I think the one thing I'd pick on is the pacing of the lines which seem a tad fast at times but otherwise this was a good audition, thank you!
I appreciate you for taking the time to comment on not only my audition but also others in a well thought out way, I probably should have gone through the monologue a tad more and, also I do sometimes find myself accidentally rushing through words, hopefully it wasn't too bad, nonetheless thank you for the feedback!