Project: Vigilante
Anna for King of Spades Rai
Vocal Profile: baritone to bass range; neutral but assertive tone, combined casual and formal speech, rarely uses any slang or profanities; no preference for accent but avoid European accents
Character Profile: aged 23/24; King of Spades and a reliable and efficient leader; he used to be closer to the protagonist as kids but has distanced himself since taking on this role and would even consider her a pest; a cold, emotionless abyss with a focus on time running out
Feel free to take creative liberties with the lines!
- english
- male young adult
- male adult
[concern] Why don't you stop looking for messes to clean up and sort out your own life first? [sigh] You never listen.
[threatening] Unless you want to be buried where you stand, I strongly suggest moving aside.
[monologue] Hm? What do you want? Raijun, King of Spades, what's it to you? If you're looking for someone to run an errand you're in the wrong place. [sigh] You're not the first to question the way I run things and you won't be the last. Let me make one thing clear; I am not my father, you will receive no courtesies from me for simply knowing him. I do not know you. As far as you're concerned, that means I have no use for you. Get lost, I don't have time for this.
I think you sound a little too emotive for this particular character, specifically because your emphases, although placed well, are a little too strong and more present than what you'd expect in a neutral tone. With the way you delivered the lines, the character has an ever-present annoyed tone, which isn't unfitting per se but doesn't leave much room for neutrality. The pacing did however convey someone commanding and was overall variable and nicely done, as were the inflections. I think you might actually do well with the lines for Jack of Spades Pierce/Unnamed Male if you're interested. It was an interesting take to listen to overall, thank you for auditioning!
Thank you for the feedback! I actually am interested in both roles, should I make submissions for both or is this current submission fine?
A submission for both roles if you have the time, there's about a week until the final deadline. Good luck!