Project: Vigilante
Jon Fox for Jack of Spades Pierce
Vocal Profile: baritone to bass range; moody, plenty of slang, obscenity, vulgarity, profanity you name it; no preference for accents, feel free to experiment
Character Profile: aged 22/23; recently appointed Jack of Spades by Rai for whom he has deep respect; strangely insecure about his place in The Spades so will often go out of his way to ensure none question their strength; a competent brawny school dropout.
Feel free to take creative liberties with the lines!
- english
- male adult
- male young adult
[thoughtful] The Spades...are my home. It's my job to make sure everything remains in order, because no one wants a dumpster of a home.
[annoyed] You know, there's a word for people like you. It's [insert a string of profanities]. Yeah, one word, look it up.
[monologue] I'm the Jack of Spades, I'm here because I serve a purpose. I make sure those Diamond idiots don't get too cocky and keep things in check when Alvah's too busy baby sitting that pest or Rai is out on actual jobs. Why are you here? Don't tell me trash-talking is all you're good at. [sigh] Grab a bat, we're going to learn some basics. And for future reference, if I catch your ugly face trash talking Raijun or The Spades, expect a knife through your neck.
I like the interesting take on the second line, it was quite funny actually haha. Overall, however, I'm not hearing the moodiness of the character, your voice sounds quite relaxed instead of annoyed. This is mostly due to your monotonous pacing and lack of emphases and emotive tones. If you want to be able to create variety in your tone and expression of emotion, definitely incorporate different types of pacing, emphases and inflections. Thank you for the audition nonetheless!
Thank you for the feedback! I'm just starting out and still learning, so I will take all the constructive criticism I can to help improve my craft. Also, thank you for the opportunity!
Of course, you're very welcome, I wish you good luck!