You got me sold! I'll take 6! You got a great commercial voice. You pace was on point and even throughout the take. Great work!

Your pacing and tone were great for something like a radio or tv ad! Keep in mind the prompt of being in a gymnasium without a microphone. In order for the audience to hear you in a large room, you will want to project. Projecting requires engaging your diaphragm to get a big breath behind your words. It also requires slowing down a bit so your words don’t blend together and become hard to understand. You can practice some breathing exercises to help you get a more supported breath. A way to grab your audience’s attention a bit more when reading off long lists is to vary your pacing, tone, and volume. You did a great job with your enunciation! Keep up the good work!