I really like the energy and feel you projected your voice well! My only critique would be to work a little on the annunciation, otherwise great job! :)

It was definitely a tougher script, but you got through it! If you find yourself making mistakes you can always re-record that part! Scripts do not always need to be done in one singular take. Slowing down a little bit will also help you with making less mistakes as you can take your time. Try enunciating your words a bit more to allow your audience to hear you more clearly. This will come with the practice of reading aloud and slowing yourself down to make sure you’re saying each part of the word clearly. You had great energy throughout your read! Keep practicing and remember you can always retake a line you mess up on!