Good Job : )

I love the little changes in your tone that brought out the character! Very fun! Remember that slates aren’t necessary so you don’t have to do them unless an audition specifically asks for it! For the pacing, you want to slow down a bit. When you go too fast, your words start to blend together which means they aren’t clear and hard to understand, especially to the audience who doesn’t have the words in front of them. This also causes you to run out of breath way quicker, so take your time and focus on breathing and articulating. Also, make sure to project your voice so it fits with the scene given! Good work!