Good Job : )

Honestly, it sounds fine to my untrained ears. Nothing immediately jumps out to me. Your voice is smooth and you didn't make any big line-flubs that I noticed. You have good emphasis/intonation as well.

Remember that you need to project your voice so that people are able to hear you when you’re in a gym with no microphone. You got quieter as you continued so try to imagine yourself in the scene and think about your audience and who you are speaking to. Use your diaphragm and really push out the air and your voice to reach the other side of the room. Find those spots to take a big breath so that you don’t run out of breath easily. Work on your straw and breathing exercises and practice reading aloud. Good job!