Project: Vigilante
RonkOfGhashVA for Detective Oliver Finnian
Vocal Profile: baritone to bass range; authoritative, formal and sometimes uses profanity; no preference for accent, feel free to experiment
Character Profile: aged 27/28; his recent promotion to Detective can be accredited to his obsession with his work; used to know and respect the previous King of Spades when he was a constable but he does not agree with breaking the law; his jokes are terrifying
Feel free to take creative liberties with the lines!
- english
- male adult
[humourous] A holiday? Bold of you to assume I'd authorise leave when we have a menace playing town hero. At ease, Constable, I'm joking.
[furious] Have we still not tracked down who these anonymous notes are coming from?! What is our budget being wasted on?!
[monologue] I'm Detective Finnian, you wanted to see me? A lead on the vigilante? My men and I have been looking for months and you mean to tell me you came across this only yesterday? If you're pulling my leg, you had better think twice, I'm currently not in the mood. I see. In that case I will look into it, thank you for your time. [sighs] Sorry, I've no time for an interview, I don't sleep as it is, the last thing I need is the media on my back too.
The rumble in the back of your voice is a pleasant addition but there are some lines where it detracts from the clarity of your voice and emotive tones. You have good pacing and emphasis placement but the strength of your emphases and inflections are a little weak when you're speaking casually, which again detracts from your emotive tones. Overall I'm not hearing an authoritative tone for this character either but saying that you certainly have the potential for it. Thank you for the audition!
Thank you very much for the feedback! I appreciate it! I'll work on it!