I like how laidback your voice naturally sounds. Nice Job!

Nice voice and good work!

your voice sounds really smooth, I felt like I was really watching a television commercial.

Remember that you want to really project your voice so that it's as if you’re in a gym without a mic and you need everyone to hear you. It’s important to fit inside the scenario that directors give so that it fits their vision and fits the project. Be mindful of any sort of noises such as claps, objects moving, or anything that picks up in the audio, especially if this was a real audition, but for homework I’m not worried about any of that. I want you to have a bit more fun with this and really think about ways to make your performance stand out amongst the rest. You don’t have to stick in one tone throughout. Make sure to find places to pause and take breaths that doesn’t hinder the flow of the read. Having enough breath also helps with keeping words nice and clear too! Keep up the great work!