this definitely felt like i was in a gymnasium hearing a coach talk to their students. i think you nailed.

I really liked the little improv you had in the beginning! This is a really great way to get yourself into character and into the scene! You did a great job projecting your voice! Make sure that you don’t sound super out of breath and try to avoid shouting as best you can. Posture plays a big role as well when projecting and overall performing, so with your situation, you wanna make sure you are standing or sitting straight so your chest can expand properly. Just try to get comfortable the best way you can with your mic. So now that you have that, I want you to start adding in more variations of tone changes, emphasis, inflections, etc. Changing up the cadence so that you don’t have a rhythm going on where each word and phrase sounds exactly the same. Play around with the scene and character and don’t be afraid to go outside the box! Great job!